All Comments on 'Slave Girls of Earth Ch. 01'

by Rutabaga72

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What a mess

Sorry but this was confusing. No background on characters. No description of world. Just a hot mess

petmyheadpetmyheadover 5 years ago

Great work! I love these alternate realities and high tech collars are the best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice

Great writing, can't wait for the next chapter

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