All Comments on 'Slave to My Indian Maid Ch. 16'
by spankedboy
- 62 Comments
spankedboy2 months agoAuthor@anon why you would write that, that too in all caps. So rude! this is a story of the maids, stick to comments on that.
Anonymous2 months agoStory is good but it’s on repiting stuff.
The village and Delhi should have been started.
A little bath , shaving and new stuff would have been appreciated.
You are talented and can make use of all these ideas we hope.
Anonymous2 months agoUp to 15 chapters are great
Your are great writer
Including tarek mother in next chapters
Anonymous2 months ago@anon is correct, we readers really like ur Vidya series. That's ur USP dear author @spankedboy (aka Tarek Zia) . Seriously telling , plz stick to it & don't waste ur precious time, efforts & energy into other stories. Ps. not writing in CAPS. Hope u take it seriously
Anonymous2 months agoAmazing story Tarek. You are the best Indian femdom writer.. May be even the best in the whole world. Pls include some armpit worship also in the next part
Anonymous2 months agolol what rude, Vidya Mathur is the only reason why you're relevant, I'm sure the comment numbers on this series versus Vidya series explains that perfectly.
To be honest, you probably are the real world equivalent of Rajesh Mathur, someone who indulges in literature fantasy about his ideal woman cheating, participating in gangbangs, and enjoying getting raped by lower class men. At least stay true to your character and close that series first.
Anonymous2 months agoPlease don't take as much time for Next part as you did for this one
Btw I loved all your stories
Please never stop writing
Anonymous2 months agoBeen waiting a long time for this episode. Hopefully the next one will not take too long. Dear author you promised you will post the episodes close together.
I cannot wait until they are in Rashida's village. Please include some village bathing scene.
Anonymous2 months agoBro pls i mean i am begging u to pls add those emotional after care scenes of hugging , patting , consoling in embrace , etc ... it was lacking emotions .. it was not like ur previous parts ... it felt too rude one and without love .. pls consider it bro.
Akashahmed44442 months agoGreat as always. Those kissing and caring parts with Zarine were the best.Don't listen to some people about vidya or other stories.This is your best work.Sad part is we might have to wait for a long time for another update. And also personally for me would to see more Rubina and Zarine but don't think that is happening anytime soon.Good luck to you Tarek.
spankedboy2 months agoAuthor@anon village will start next chapter and likely end in that chapter too.
@anon Tarek mother will play a role in the last chapter.
@anon of course.
@anon
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You will soon post next chapter
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I don't know whether I will post it soon or not, but will try.
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is correct, we readers really like ur Vidya series. That's ur USP dear author @spankedboy (aka Tarek Zia) . Seriously telling , plz stick to it & don't waste ur precious time, efforts & energy into other stories. Ps. not writing in CAPS. Hope u take it seriously
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Let me break it down for all. All of my stories are trash. No need to say it. Don't waste your time here. Go do something else.
@anon
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Amazing story Tarek. You are the best Indian femdom writer.. May be even the best in the whole world. Pls include some armpit worship also in the next part
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Thanks for the comment. All of that will be there.
@anon
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Vidya Mathur is the only reason why you're relevant
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Seriously bro, this is all trash. Don't waste your time here rubbing your little cock on these stories. Go find something productive to do. Like kiss your boss's asshole.
@anon
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Please don't take as much time for Next part as you did for this one
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Hope to post the next quickly.
@anon,
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Been waiting a long time for this episode. Hopefully the next one will not take too long. Dear author you promised you will post the episodes close together.
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Hope to post the next quickly.
@anon will add hugging and consoling scenes.
@Jack_dom, thank you.
@anon, Zarine is/was an amazing lady.
@anon will hope to post them soon.
@rabbitrob thanks.
@akashahmed44
Thank you for the comment! Much appreciated.
Anonymous2 months agoDont end this story. Prolong it till the village and then after few chapters end it as you want.
Please dont end it, extend it to the villaga and delhi. Add few chapters more till 20. Please
Anonymous2 months agoYour writing is really crappy. And you know it. Which is why you react aggressively to every comment here, including those that are mildly critical.
And in all probability, the anonymous favourable comments are not from others but have been plugged in by you.
Anonymous2 months agoLove this story, love this episode. A climax is building!!! He is sinking deeper and deeper. She is also unable to prevent herself from falling in love!!!
Anonymous2 months agoWhy are you in a hurry to end this series? When in Vidya series you talked about posting the last episodes. We fans want these two series to continue for a long time! Please!
Anonymous2 months agoAtlast! after 2 years the readers got something about this story. I m glad that u didn’t forget about the story and posted update. But the Delhi life should been started by now, guess enough spank lash whooshing took place over the years. Wanted Tarek and Rashida’s life in a Delhi apartment now where Rashida suppose to fulfill her fetish punish on Tarek all the day and night. On upcoming episode (I don’t know when. Maybe in the year 2025) Rashida’s village times doesn’t sounds like anything else will change but to punishments go on by the Rashida’s mother and sister like as she did all the episodes. In my opinion Tarek and Rashida’s Delhi episode should post in hurry where the maid Rashida gonna fulfill her fetish on her slave
spankedboy2 months agoAuthor@anon --- Your writing is really crappy. ----
Yes I know. As I always say, this is trash, don't waste your time here. Go find something positive to do in your life rather than read third class erotica.
@anon --- Love this story, love this episode. --- yes you are right. A climax is building!
@anon, thanks for the comment.
angelus2882 months agoI just noticed now the new chapter. I'm very glad to see the story updated, I love it. I look forward to the village chapter.
Anonymous2 months agoHey spankedboy, kinda appalled and amused to see some of the negative comments here.
Out of all your story series, this one's my favourite. These stories are the closest to my own fantasies, and you flesh them out beautifully. I haven't quite found something close to this desi maid femdom erotica anywhere else. Great job on the latest chapter.
Would love to see more of Tarek worshipping Rashida's body (and the fluids that it produces). The way you write about Tarek worshipping her ass is just perfect. Would love to see more of that, and more of Tarek worshipping others' asses too, if that's possible. Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you for your dedication to this series.
spankedboy2 months agoAuthor@angelus288 , thanks. It might be a month before i post it, but let's see.
@anon, thanks for the comment.
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Would love to see more of Tarek worshipping Rashida's body (and the fluids that it produces). The way you write about Tarek worshipping her ass is just perfect.
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It is from my (perverted) heart!
Anonymous2 months agoLove this chapter. Setting it up really nicely for the finale. She loves him, he loves her. I am thinking there will be some twist. The mother, maybe. Please post quickly.
Anonymous2 months agoDont end this story. Prolong it till the village and then after few chapters end it as you want.
Please dont end it, extend it to the villaga and delhi. Add few chapters more till 20. Please
spankedboyabout 2 months agoAuthor@anon at least a month before it's published. I do have the final chapter mostly written down.
@anon - lol a 100! As I said, this is based on real life story.
@anon at least a month.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoAmazing- It seems like it was worth the wait, we'll written - can't wait for the new chapters.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoTreat tarek as a real slave dog in village. Like taking walk in public with him on leash. Not nude but wearing expensive clothes which provides the public that he is rich ehich encourages them to use him. Public spit bukakkem And at home rashidas cousins also come. Everyone uses tarek. Add some facesitting probably a group together. Mom tries to use him for shit eating
Anonymousabout 2 months agoThis series is one of the best in Literotica. I mean, I can even call it one of the best romance stories. Baba loves bua in his unique way. And now Bua startes to love him back. I wonder what will happen in the final story.
Anonymousabout 1 month agoAny update about next chapter?
In village episode try to include all the cousin's and friends of rashida in village to humilate baba and you can include a female friend of baba from his college,who is from same village or near by village and aslo rashida accepts her to punish baba. Include some female friends (like 3 or 4) of baba's like from school or college to increase the humiliation more further.
spankedboyabout 1 month agoAuthor@anon no update yet. I always said these are based on real life experiences so some ideas cannot be incorporated.
Anonymousabout 1 month agochapter 16 complete waste :( , i was happy when i see new chapter .when i first read this story i was a teenager that time , but now i am young enough to get marry , i am waiting for chapter 17 and i dont want to read it with my son . so please add chapter 17 without adding any old memory .
Anonymousabout 1 month agoi am wonder your maids or i should say mistresses are muslims but no religious humiliation ? no conversion ?
spankedboy30 days agoAuthor@anon I will write when I get time.
@anon chap 16 may be waste . As I said, I write trash. Ignore.
@anon what religious conversion? Everyone in this story is Muslim.
@anon exactly
@anon i will write soon but no promises.
Anonymous22 days agoYou told in April the next part will be released and it's been almost 50 days and still waiting for the next.. still how many days will it take
Anonymous17 days agoBro log isi leye next chapter kha rhe rha because they love your story
Or tum humesha ulta sindha bolte ho its not paid and so so
Or tum hi bolte ho next chapter jaldi aae ga fir log comments karte h
Fir tum bolte ho
Bro don’t mind i also love your stories specially maids when
Anonymous4 days agoBro, I know it's not a paid gig, But please tell us around when it'll be completed. You can post whenever you want, no problem, I'll wait, just don't stop the series please...
Akashahmed44443 days agoFirst came across these stories 3-4 years ago.We had a maid in our house who is slightly younger than me who used to bullied by all the members of my family mostly by my mom(I also have been rude to her sometimes).But in the meantime I had some weird thinking like what if she fights back.What if she starts giving back to everyone.I think this is where kink with femdom strated.Then I started looking for videos stories online about maid femdom but as everyone knows this is not a common theme specially in indian subcontinent.I came across your stories and it was easily the best piece of writing about maid and femdom.I find Rubina very fascinating. How she hates the class discrimination of the society and how she asserted dominance over Tarek despite being younger than him.It's obvious that I found her fascinating because she resembles the younger maid who was in our house.Now if I may vent about how Rubina and Tarek's relationship was portrayed at the end then I would say that they had so much potential but ended up being kinda monotonous one dimensional torture sessions.Seems like we read the same canning and slapping scenes one too many times.I wish Rubina's character had some amount of empathy towards Tarek.Really wish we had a whole chapter where after torturing and being mean and cruel to tarek for so many years Rubina would be nice and caring towards Tarek and they would make sweet sweet love to each other(Their part in chapter 14 is way too short in my opinion).I like zarine a lot because she is somewhat sympathetic towards Tarek.But hey you are the creator and you have the uppermost authority in deciding how the characters would end up.(Didn’t want to be critical here but couldn’t control myself.Ignore this part if you want)
Now about this story,obviously I am biased but I would say this is your magnum opus.The plot is very unique,characters are fascinating and writing is top notch.Those bengali dialogues are the best part of the stories.
Now cut to the chase why i am writing this big ass essay.I noticed couple of your replies in this chapter. It seems like you might be dealing with something at work or at life in general.I might be completely wrong but if you really are dealing with anything in life I hope you overcome it.I hope you find peace and happiness my friend.I saw that you are writing this story since 2016.Congratulations. It's been a long time.
I was contemplating whether I should send this or not.Then I thought that you should know that some of us do appreciate your work.I myself also kinda over this maid thing so I may never muster enough will or courage to write this again.Don't get me wrong sometimes I also got annoyed with your long delays and replies but as you have said this is not a paid gig and we don't know what's happening at your end.So good luck to you brother.
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