by Asperger27
There will be. I plan on making two more chapters soon.
Thanks for the boast in confidence.
Love the direction the latest chapter is taking. However, you might consider getting an editor as there seemed a lot more grammar errors than before. Also the character names kept switching: Audrey became Aubrey, Helen became Amber, Ben became George.
Good story. I hope Helen was joking about her tubes being tied. I would love to read that Pete knocked up his ex's mom and Helen telling her daughter she is going marry Pete and have his kids and watch Kim get pissed
Chapter 07 is in the works now. I'm putting something that I added towards the end of ch.06 into ch.07.
Now ch.08....ch.08 will have someone getting pissed at someone getting married snd humiliated to boot. Won't say who, but it will be hinted in ch.07.
Helen sadly did have her tubes tied after the birth of her daughter. But she will rub it in Kim's face that she's dating Pete now and also took his virginity. All if that will be added in Ch.07.
Well you stated getting pissed at someone getting married probably means Pete might be the 1 pissed at his mom and Ben as for the humiliated part goes that can be a few ways but both would be completely fucked up if it is the mom and Ben could be Pete and Helen and the daughter getting pissed and then humiliated again would be a little fucked up as far as how this part ending I get why she left but Pete strikes me as the kinda of person that won't believe it so easily he will probably think she didn't want to spend the day with him and really wanted to meet her daughter's new boyfriend
Still working on newest chapter. Just been busy. Account is still the same, its just under a new email address.
On the very first page of this story, Ben's cock was 8 inches. Somehow it grew to 10 inches. Pete insisted on waiting to have sex until Prom night with Kim, but he agrees to fuck an older woman after a short conversation?
Good story but really needs an editor, there are wrong names throughout and many other smaller inconsistencies. Helen changes to Amber, Ben became George. I think Audrey was wrong at least once. I'm still confused if Ben's dad is in the picture, because it usually refers to his "parents" but I don't think I saw the dad mentioned even once.