by nikkiesilk
Luv'it! The characters are real three-dimensional and the story could easily go for a filmscript. I would go for the movie if it also would include the saucy parts as well, since they are an essential part of what makes the love affairs depicted so special and it's moral is more comprehensive than often is preached from the pulpit.
Well, I tried reading this as a stroke off story, I just can't. Even though I DO thoroughly enjoy the eroticism. I always get caught up in the romance and emotion and start crying with happiness for Olivia. This happened every time I read it. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
Miss Kira Bangkok
IS A UNDER STATEMENT...I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY...GREAT WORK...
THANK YOU...BETTY jo xoxo
Wow, superbly written. This is so damned brilliant & eloquent. I found this by accident, it was a gift, sheer joy & pleasure as I read this intelligent, witty, & deeply emotional piece of fiction. It was sexy & heartbreaking & upmifting & joyful. You are a marvelous talent, this story is masterfully rendeted. As a lesbian, I was so able to relate to this. It was beautifully told. Certainly one of the best stories I've read in the last 2 years on this site. Thank you, Nikkie, for this beautiful story. It was a serendipitous gift finding it, one I shall treasure as a favorite.
Honestly, I opened the first chapter looking for something for a quick stroke. By halfway through the first chapter, I was hooked. When I read the flashback within a flashback, I thought Nikkiesilk was getting too ambitious, and that the story would devolve into a confusing mess. I was wrong there too. Good story telling!
Another Riveting work of Sexually charged Fiction . I loved this one just as much as the first . Well done !
Nikki, you continue to be one of my favorite authors of all time. This piece is richly textured enough that it could be expanded to a novel. Your pacing, character development, plotting, and visuals are all perfect. I love all the character development. There's always a special karma to your stories that makes things turn out as they should but never in an obvious way. I've read it twice and am so wet.
Hugs & Kisses, Di
A beautiful story, well written and developed, so that the sex scenes fit into the narrative and are more erotic for that.. Stephanie
Love how you took real live problems aka bulling and made an amazing story out of it. Keep up the good work. No need to add to this story, it's perfect.
I enjoyed your story so much that parts of it left me quiet emotional, and who could ask for anything more. Thank you xx
What a story, I wish I was Sam lucky bugger. Please write some more to this story