All Comments on 'Slut Wife'

by HARDLUND01

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TajfaTajfa2 months ago

You need to read what you wrote before publishing.

There are multiple typos that make it very difficult to read. Then there is the story. Please use tags to let readers know what to expect so a decision can be made to read or not.

Lifestyle66Lifestyle662 months ago

This has to be one of the worst stories I've read in "Loving Wives" in a long time. I'd give it a 1 for the poor quality of the writing and gay sex, except I don't usually give 1's, particularly for a writer's first effort. So, this gets a 2.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This should have been posted in 'Gay Male'. Please do not insult us with any more putrid trash like this.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

EFIT, ESIT, ERIT... EDIT, EDIT, EDIT and proof read! Get my point?

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

As this is the writer's first effort, I do not rate.

It would be 1 star, as there is no zero star option.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Not worth reading past the first sentence.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

It's a 1 all day long

26thNC26thNC2 months ago

Some twit was desperate to post their very lame cuck story.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Really poor writing

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

The gay angle was unexpected for a story called Slut Wife in the LW category. Not what I was looking for. Another category for this would have been better.

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