by HARDLUND01
You need to read what you wrote before publishing.
There are multiple typos that make it very difficult to read. Then there is the story. Please use tags to let readers know what to expect so a decision can be made to read or not.
This has to be one of the worst stories I've read in "Loving Wives" in a long time. I'd give it a 1 for the poor quality of the writing and gay sex, except I don't usually give 1's, particularly for a writer's first effort. So, this gets a 2.
This should have been posted in 'Gay Male'. Please do not insult us with any more putrid trash like this.
As this is the writer's first effort, I do not rate.
It would be 1 star, as there is no zero star option.
The gay angle was unexpected for a story called Slut Wife in the LW category. Not what I was looking for. Another category for this would have been better.