All Comments on 'Slutty Tales Pt. 02: Becky'

by AnetteSnow

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Only_connect over 3 years ago

Pretty basic, poor writing. A lot of confusion of past and present tenses. And the sex is porno and insensitive.

AnetteSnow over 3 years agoAuthor

Insensitive? It's a bdsm story...

Well, if you're into pink fluffy stuff with rainbows and unicorn then don't read bdsm. Basic. I wanted to check out YOUR amazing work but not so surprisingly found none. The only valid comment could be the confusing tenses which i will look up. Thanks for the comment anyway.

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