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by carrteun

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Maybe he should take her up on her offer!

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oldsage_1oldsage_1over 2 years ago

I have read several of the 750's and this was by far the best. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers

SAGE

mac1729mac1729over 2 years ago

Great short story and I think it sets up for a longer follow up hopefully

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't imagine either of yhem not going for it right then and there.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 2 years ago

Great story, well told.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I really hope there is more to this story. You did well with this, held attention, used proper grammar, spelling and all that stuff. It was over too soon.

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9/19/2023 It has been over a year since I last posted something. I have a story almost ready for Halloween, the first time I've tried to construct a story for that holiday. Just a section of rewrite and a final editing check before it's done. It will be ready in time for the H...