All Comments on 'Snowed In'

Sorry....you really need an editor

as the other poster said, you really do need an editor. Other than that, I liked it Not quite 5 stars though

Looking forward to seeing other stories from you

I liked the tale and the sentiment but, like the others have said, you need help with editing. 4*

PLEEAASSEE!!

PROOF READ!!!!!

There are so any errors that I couldn't stand more than a quarter of the page!!

On the day you attended school, did you go to an English lesson?

The story is disjointed, jumping around without any guidance. What makes it much worse is the grammar. Some correct punctuation would be good and look up the difference between to and too.

Absolutely awful. Recommend author go back to grade school for additional English study.