by Married_and_satisfied
Great story. My only complaint is that she walked 50 yards and was freezing. He was going to walk a mile and be fine?
Good premise.
Sex all rushed.
Once they got home there was no extended foreplay/preliminaries. He fingered her to an orgasm, but too mechanically. Too fast.
Once she'd had her orgasms and he hadn't, could have used some dialog where she asked him how (and where) he wanted to cum. Would he like to fuck her tits? Would he like her to give him a blowjob? Would he like to be teased?
Three stars.
Great story, love the snowed in premise. I have to agree with a previous comment that the sex was a little rushed, it could've had a little more build up before it happened to make it more exciting. Other than that, it was very good and deserved five stars.