All Comments on 'Snowy Interludes'

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer3 months ago

What a great way to use 750 words! The only thing wrong with this story is that you weren't conscious enough to enjoy the hot fun. ;-)

DevonCowboyDevonCowboy3 months ago

I think you would be good with poetry. Pared right down making every word or gesture count.

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...