All Comments on 'Something about Me and You Pt. 03'

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MandylionMandylionover 4 years ago
Amazing story

Really love this story. The way you describe sex scenes is perfect. I love Sam she is lovely and tender. Just two questions: There will be always just trans on male or there will be male on trans too? and ¿When will be realease next chapter? thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love this been waiting on the next chaptors for weeks ... Y havent u added a new chapter???

This story makes me cum so hard

ErichmasterfieldErichmasterfieldover 4 years agoAuthor
Reply from author,

Hello, unfourtunately this is the worst time of year for people occupying positions such as mine, my creative works have taken to the backburner for the last month or so, however I expect that in the new year there shall be a more frequent release schedule! Thank you all for your patience!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Outstanding

This keeps getting better and better! Can’t stop reading!

Damned_But_Not_ForgottenDamned_But_Not_Forgottenalmost 2 years ago

Boy this just took a turn. Haven't finished but gotta wonder about Montreal.

First off, I thought Montreal was on the East coast of North America. Apparently it is between The Amazon and Valhalla because in Montreal a 5' 10" woman is not tall. In Los Angeles that is model height. The average is 5' 5".

Second, isn't kidnapping, blackmail, and forced sex illegal in Montreal? This story started out very believable and very sweet. Fairly real reactions. Then the guy tries to buy a duck mold? Why didn't he just buy a dildo similar in size? And actually, wouldn't an unsure man buy a small dildo to see if he even wants something up his ass?

I will continue, but kinda bummed.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Yep. Gotta agree with Damned_But_Not_Forgotten. This story took a turn for the worst. Had to stop as soon as the idea of force/blackmail started. Sorry, just not my thing. Should have stuck with the love story between Sam and Mike.

But to each his own.

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Hello my name is Erich Masterfield, I am new to writing Erotic fiction, though not to writing as an art form. My goal is to develop my skill in writing by applying myself to a variety of perspectives. Thus far the response has been good I hope I can continue to better myself a...