by Keroin
plenty of scope with these characters, I am surprised to be the first to comment. A nice attempt to avoid some of the genre cliches and nicely executed as well. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC
Brilliant hon. It's got a proper 'story' feel to it, rather than just smut. You're writing is a joy to read, love the characters. Can't wait to get the time to read the next parts :D
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! I'm so glad you enjoyed my little romp through the South Pacific.
K