by grimbous
Another great chapter! Can't wait for Donald to finally be ready for Evelyn
We don't have a problem with it being too slow hh, we enjoy the ride, I'm just afraid that it won't be completed if it took a great amount of energy and time from you. I know it's a lot to ask, but this story needs to be completed :)
Look here is my suggestion
Alan and Eugene should be in the picture more with Donald. To embrace his fullest and unique masculinity.
Let Eugene be a brother to Donald and Eugene falls for Kitty.
Either way you're a very talented writer. I like the entire storyline. Take your time and enjoy doing your artwork for this novel.
it has been a month since your last post, you have turned them out pretty much on time each month, and so I hope you are ok, and that everything is in order, hope to see the next installment in this series.
Your writing, this story, it is so good. I can understand and relate to Donny's struggles and his past. The dream scene almost got to me if it had gone on a little longer and that is truly a mark of a writer that knows what they're doing. I can't wait to continue reading.