All Comments on 'Son of Sleep Ch. 05'

I need to see more!

This story has not yet played out to its full extent, as Alex has other mortals he needs to deal with.

Mariah and Hypnos also have more story to go as Hypnos has designs on conquering the goddess Aphrodite herself, while Hypnos has more to teach Alex and Alex needs to double team Mariah with his father..

Enjoyed the short series.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it

Please make more of this maybe make it more challenging let home meet other demi gods other gods kids show him a whole new word

It's fun and sexy! I certainly hope that you'll continue this story, especially since it seems he's started a small harem and Hypnos has his two women completely accepting. One thought would be, is what Hypnos would think of Alex taking his former lover, Alex's Mom? Or of course, having Alex take his two girls and going to school with them as his girlfriends... Food for thought. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us!

Love this arc, well written as usual, keep going!

Very well-written. Such a smooth flow to the story. Really hot descriptions. Would love more like this.

Amazing work, any way we can get more?

Yes, I enjoyed this one. Would love to see where you want to take it next.

Hey JC I am writing today to ask great job on all your stories but I am wondering where France inc and the other stories you have that are in the middle of arcs and stuff are because all of your workers are great so I hope you can continue them and if you can’t asnser here here is my email caleb.postie@yahoo.com

I would love to see more.

Not much of a reviewer, but this was great great chapter

IT'S A GREAT STORY AND SO MANY WAYS TO KEEP IT GOING! LOVE YOUR WORK

Would love to see more

Thank you for this series! Huzzah!!!!

I can’t wait to see what you write next.

More more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now that Alex has both Paige and his mother under his ‘spell’, I need MORE! Awesome tale!

I look forward to future adventures of the demigods.

This is phenomenal, and I hope it continues in some form!

For being a good writer

Thought it a good series. Creative storyline. Kind of would have like the last chapter to be stretched and split into two.

Volume 2 could be about another God being introduced and their demigod.

i really enjoyed your series however all good things come to an end, and i think adding more is unnecessary and will subtract from its quality like an unnecessary movie sequel.

Waiting for you to continue with the father and son and their conquests and adventures.

I have to say you really impressed me. Good job!

Your characters are great and I would love to see a sequel series!

More damn you, MORE~

I'm not used to leaving comments, I normally read on my phone, But damn, there has to be more!!!

Loved the characters and plot. You write the actual sex scenes perfectly which is surprisingly rare on Lit. I do hope there will be more of Alex’s stories in the near future. Also, I thought you were going to have anal at some point when you had Hypnos claim Antheia’s ass in the first part. That you didn’t was probably my only disappointment, otherwise a fantastic read.

One of the best written stories on here - personally I’m not a fan of the incest pieces, but your writing is fantastic! Keep it up!

Can't wait to see what happens the sequel!!!

Holy shit this is the first in a while of eroticas ive read and its made me fall in love with mythology and the storyline is sooooo good. Please give us more

I really like the way you use Greek Gods, my only comment is stick to 1 story all this back and forth is a little confusing. Overall a very good story. Thank you for sharing it with everyone.

More please please! I really love you're story!

Please write a sequel series with same characters, this was one of my top 3 favorite series!

I have loved this story and would like to know what will happen to Alex and his harem after this.

Please continue - this was a great read!

Please continue this story, we would all love to hear more.

What! This cant be the end. Lots more please.

The characters interesting but the sex was less than I expected from a Greek god. T

Can't wait to see what you come up with next! Amazing as always!

Awesome read. Don't mind the two story lines at all. However, keep them consistent, Mariah and Hypnos emptied their cups twice.

This was an excellent arc. Thanks for writing, I hope you continue.

Hate the back and forth. Loves the regular non god story line. It is easy to just skip the Hypnos parts though.

Have enjoyed pretty much all of your stories over time. This one is no different!

Uh. Yeah. Continue please? Loved this.

Hottest story ever. Has all the things I love and then some. Quality writing, unique plot, developed characters, great sex. Thank you for all your efforts - write more and often. I'm a new fan.

Great story. Would love to see more!

Yes, this is an excellent tale and should be continued. This is a great start. Looking forward to more on this as well as your other stories.

More stories please!

Great story, 5* to each part. Would love to see how this continues and how Hypnos power struggle with the other gods continuous and how he finally fucks aphrodite.

Also would love to see Alex spread his wingsand find more very busty to seduce.

Really enjoyed all 5 parts. Would hate to see it end there. You can still take this in so many directions. Keep up the writing please.

I don't really care about Hypnis, he's filling too much space, and is just boring.

The story would be better if the son and friends got fleshed ou more to make them feel like real people. Not to mention a slower progression, and perhaps have him work to get his new body.

Now it just feels like a wish fulfilment, giving him a bigger dick was particularly cringeworthy, the biggest erotica cliche ever.

Good story, just be a little more careful with your continuity. Opening page of chapter 5, Hypnos brewing coffee with Mariah sat on counter in front of him, after putting milk and sugar on tray, she was in bed where he'd left her. It's the little things that add up to the whole, otherwise great work

I truly enjoyed it.

You left a few strings undone.

Please continue this story, even if you have to start a new story line using these people. These is a lot of things that are left way open and many directions that the story can go. Since Hypnos seems to be falling for his employee and she told him she prefers "good fathers" maybe have Hypnos get more involved with Alex more and have him show Alex just what all his powers are capable of.

Please more!

You must bring back Hypnos and Alex!

Excellent series. I'm a regular reader of yours, and this series is what got me started .

Wow, is there anywhere you can't go from here?

MORE!!!!!!

Wait, I mean MORE! Please?!

Nuff said !

Could do with more expanding what happens with Alexander.

It was great but I was looking forward to so much more.

More of that, please!

Fantastic! More please!

I really enjoyed the series and look forward to the next one!

This is a fun story please add to this series. I think it would be fun to see what direction you take these characters.

Much better to end on an arc than a cliffhanger. You do great work and I hope you continue to write.

Please keep the story going.

Love all your stories keep it going

Hope you keep the characters and drive a new plot forward. Maybe a slightly more ominous threat, harder to achieve goals, and greater rewards? Love what you've done so far. Hoping for more!

This is the first time that I've read one of your works, and I must say that I am impressed. I didn't post on the other chapters, because I saw that you hadn't worked on it in a while and I wanted to read it all first. This was a really good story, and I'd love to read more. I highly encourage you to keep writing on it, but, since you're done for now, I have a few questions and a comment or two. First, is Mariah one of Hypnos' children that he forgot about? I thought that was the way you were taking it in the early chapters, but its kind of vague the way you left it. I thought that she'd either be a demi-god, Aphrodite in disguise, or maybe Alex's mom trying to get back at him, but you conclusively ruled out one of those options, and possibly the Aphrodite one as well. Second, there were a few typos in the chapters, nothing serious, but I'd watch out for those in the future. Third, Aren't demi-gods usually born with their powers? I found it odd and kind of distracting that Alex had to be granted his powers, and he didn't really earn his good night's sleep if he was gifted his powers, but those are minor nitpicks. Fourth, I really enjoyed this story, and I can't emphasize enough how much I'd like to read more of it. You even inspired a few new ideas of my own with yours, and I can't wait to write on my own projects. Keep at it, and thank you.

I would love to see you continue this super little story, there are endless possibilities, like fucking over all his antagonists at school, better still if they remember what happened to them outside of the trance stage,especially his slut mom and Paige so they can help recruit his hareem. Just saying lol. Love your stories. James

I wouldn't mind seeing Alex giving his mom the Math Teacher dominate and punish. Alex's girlfriend could also join in with her own cheerleader pet just to make things interesting.

Love this series would love to see where it goes next

I really like this story!

I enjoyed this entire series and think you are a great writer. Please keep writing stories so that we can keep enjoying them!

Very hot. And entertaining storyline. Cheers mate!

I would have liked to see some more revenge on his mother. She used him, tried ro ruin his life just so she could fuck some guy that never cared about her.

Why does every mother on this site seem to either hate or not give the slightest of fucks about their kids?

Writers have mother issues?

Seriously though I think it's easier. Parental issues are automatically fodder for character backstory, and asshole parents are a quick explanation for why a protagonist is

) Attending school and financially ok.

) Attending high school and not in foster care or something.

) Not really seeking parental aid dealing with reality wild things

) Not fighting against the bullshit at school

) A half step up from protagonists are orphans cliche.

All without too much effort required for the parental character.

Any chance of continuing this series in another story?

Definitely a great premise and start of many tales. Can't wait to see what else you add to the tale.

Great Read please continue this one

Loved the story, can’t wait to see what’s next

Really enjoyed it. Am still waiting to see how BDE continues. If it continues.

Loving this story and it has miles to go before it sleeps. I wouldn't object if you backed off the asshole factor just an inch or two with his mom, although he head cheerleader can wear a collar and leash to school. That'd be hot , actually. However you want to do it, please continue.

A really cool story with an unique idea. I hope you contuinue in a second act, maybe bringing Alex and Hypnos together to double team a few of their women.

I enjoyed your story. I hope you decide to continue it at some point. I'm interested to see where the story goes from here.

Jared is not likely to stay in the bg. With his Ex in a collar he'll have to be brought down in public.

And there are the lesbo teacher/sexitary to wrap up.

Happy writing. Keep it Up :)

This was great!

Please continue this! I love all your stories, however this and BDE are definitely my favorites.

I really enjoyed this story and definitely wouldn't mind more

An interesting first part! I hope you come back to the series! But for now, I'm off to check out the rest of your work!

I liked they way you allowed the character's to shine and show their real hunger for lust and love....

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...for a finish, but Alexander has nowhere to go with this Story. All he has is his Mother to use as he wishes, along with his 18-year-old GF. He can apparently fuk (against her will) any beautiful woman/girl whom he defines as a Bitch (read here his lesbian schoolteacher, and the football captain's Cheerleader GF) and any others that have annoyed him. And he can now beat up any assholes like the football Captain who have bullied him. He certainly hasn't learned anything about harnessing the Powers that Hypnos has granted him into more constructive and positive things in the future. End of Story.

I would truly love to see the series continue. Lots of potential, and not an area that has been written into the ground.