All Comments on 'Son's Football and Me Pt. 01'

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Anthony1965Anthony1965almost 2 years ago

I hope you continue this story. I really enjoyed it. I love stories about slutty mom's.

boaman007boaman007almost 2 years ago

Yes, please continue.....

LisaJayeLisaJayealmost 2 years ago

Love this story, but could use an editor. But please don't stop.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Go for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It had me swollen ande throbbing Hope you help others as well feel free to tell me more

SnoopygirlSnoopygirlover 1 year ago

I couldn’t read much of this due to the lack of good grammar. I’d advise if you want to continue writing to enlist the help of an editor or get a friend with a good understanding of the English language to read it through for you before you submit it for print. I’m a bit of a strict one when it comes to this so that’s why I couldn’t continue reading it but keep up the great work of writing still don’t let this discourage you, keep writing no matter what we all improve with practice! Keep up the good work and thx for sharing. It just isn’t for me. X

dirtysondirtysonover 1 year ago

please make on where they breed Mom/Wife

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved the story hope there’s more parts

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Terrible 😴 story 👎👎👎

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###Apologies for the long break. Your feedback overwhelmed me. Sequels will come, but I need to ease back in. Starting small before tackling big projects like "EMBRACING THE UNSEEN" and "GF's Dad." Thanks for your patience and support.### If you think my story deserves a 1-st...