All Comments on 'Sorcery and Chastity'

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ShimmeringGlossShimmeringGlossover 2 years ago

A fine marriage of seductive risk and happy endings. Wonderful stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Excellent buildup and pacing overall, and enticing subtle erotica. Top shelf quality work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is the best story I've read on here in a long time. It's the perfect premise. There are so many scenarios I'd love to see explored in future chapters. Maybe we could watch Lewis's confidence dissolve until he's a whimpering puddle. Or what happens when somebody from the Department of Magical Education shows up? How can the girls and the Headmistress wriggle out of that one?

I loved it! So good. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Good story, though personally I feel that ultimately there should be either a permanent end, or a happy endING for the MC

Here there is no permanent end, he'll be a slave indefinitely and thats pretty much it, nor is there a happy ending since bliss gained from stupidity is not positive. It ultimately retracts from the reason many read a story like this.

Still, great story otherwise, and while it might not be to my taste it will be to many others, as taste differs

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