All Comments on 'Sow Primer Ch. 05'

Love the way this is progressing. Keep it up!

Your build up and story development is very well done. I am enjoying the series immensely

I'm not really into water works , but this was interesting and erotic . One thing about drinking a lot of water is that it can be fatal , Water intoxication and hyponatremia can result when a person drinks too much water without the accompanying electrolytes. There have even been a few cases of deaths occuring . I hope no one finds this as a buzz kill as I think the story is still very good .

Well written

A number of people have written to me since the publication of this chapter, advising me of the health dangers of drinking too much water and not urinating. Having now researched this I fully endorse this warning. This is a fantasy - DO NOT try this at home. Play safe!

IYD