All Comments on 'Speak Up'

Thanks for writing so honestly about a real man and a real relationship!

Great story! You packed a whole lot of reality and expertly written sex into a relatively short story. And the empathy between two relatable characters, excellent

Its rare in the world of smut fiction to find a story so balanced between really hot sex and believable emotion. But you were able to more than achieve that! Ana and Patricio feel nuanced and real, not just two-dimensional figures used to talk about sex. This is an excellent story and I hope you continue writing more!