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by curiousrover123

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LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSE7 months ago

Quite nice but in this format it is more erotic couplings than romance. To make it a romance you would have to build onto it ;-)

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

My vote is for you to leave it. You have let us watch the lightening strike. Anything more would only be an afterimage of that blinding flash. Thank you for sharing. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Keep it going…

pepepilotpepepilot7 months ago

I think that if there isn't a part 2, I will change my vote drastically downward! ;)

Good story, so far.

JensensloverJensenslover7 months ago

Not really 'slow burn' as you state and more fitting to erotic couplings, needs more to be considered romance in my opinion.

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