All Comments on 'Spicing It Up!'

not especially well written, but very erotic. thanks for sharing

Wait, wait this is supposed to be a means to fixing the marriage therefore, we need to fix both sides correct? So Omar only after Jay has both sultry auburn hair Lucia from Rome and stunning blond Agnes from Stockholm (and maybe together, Jay may die with a smile). Then she can have Omar. I will point out the 350 lb. gorilla here. These 'fixes' are not fixing anything only distracting them hence why she wants Omar and not Jay. At this rate, the marriage will only last another year or so.

Well I’m sorry you don’t think it’s particularly well written. Readers normally seem to like my style of writing and stories.

Maybe the marriage may not last. Who knows? But with the negativity in voting and comments I have decided not to write a follow up - so we’ll never know!

Wow that was bad. You obviously hate men and want them to be humiliated. Your wimp cuck husband walked into this story a happy man married to a faithful normal wife. By the end of the story. He is a pathetic wimp cuck and the wife is a fucked up skank and a llteral paid whore. Obviously this is your idea of erotic. Well that's your fetish. Next time put your stories where they belong in the fetish and femdom category.

Nope. If thats how you spice up a marriage its toasted already. Jay won't go for the dungeon. I wouldn't. Fuck that. If you want to be an escort go do it. Leave everybody else out of it. You have already made a mockery of your marriage. This was a waste of time to read.

oh yes I hope it’s continued,please more

I enjoyed the story very much , keep writing these please . The marriage was in a rut I’d like for to meet another gentlemen at the bar . Perhaps she needs to let her Jay / Roger try her ass . He could be in her ass while Omar or another man was in her pussy .