All Comments on 'Spiraling in the Nude'

It would have taken very little persuasion for me to have spiralled down when I was David's age. In fact I could easily spiral down right now for Jack and Richard!

I found this to be one of the HOTTEST stories you've ever written. I not sure which of the many boxes you checked off in me pushed this over the edge, but over the edge I went. David's downward spiral took me right along with him. At his age I would have been doing exactly the same thing, even now, more years away than I care to admit, I doubt I'd be able to resist doing whatever Jack and Richard wanted. From Jack's description, being the type of man I always fell for at David's age, he would have definitely owned me. So, now that you've got me sitting here drooling from my mouth and my cock while thinking that ten times five *s isn't enough for this story, I have a few questions. Is this the end? Are you going to leave what happens to David in that room up to me? Or was this a tease that leads into a second chapter? I'm really hoping it's the third and right now so is my hard cock.

As erotica, this is too far from my preferences to judge it fairly on its own terms. I won't speak at all to that aspect. That's not a criticism. I try to be quiet in subjects where I'm inadequately informed.

As artistic expression, the prose is gorgeous, and the piece rings with, for lack of more precise term, authenticity. The prose has a cadence that's almost musical. I really enjoyed that aspect of it. I hope it does well in the contest.

Best regards, Pure.

VEEEry Good. Thanks for a great story.