All Comments on 'Star Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
LOVE IT!

can't wait for the end, hope 'really' soon this time. just amazin...

The_EnchantressThe_Enchantressover 14 years ago
OOOOoooooo. . . .

Trouble! *laughs* I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! I really can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I LOVE it!!!!

The new twist is absolutely awesome! This new-old guy sounds fine and delicious! I mean, he reminded her of Channing Tatum, DAMN! And the sex was apparently amazing! So, go ahead girl!

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THANK YOU for updating, but PLEASE don't make us WAIT like last time! PLEASE :)

honeybreehoneybreeover 14 years ago
Great Story even though Star is a BRAT

Personally, I can't wait to see what happens next!!! I have read chapter one of this story awhile ago but couldn't find you or your stories anymore until I saw it under new and recognize the description!!! I love Mikey and Star, these characters remind me of actual people who at the beginning just can't seem to get it together. Star is great and wonderful but comes off as a Brat at times, I mean give the guy a break saying "I love you" is hard especially in a romantic way concerning your best and only friend so I see where Mikey is coming from because if that was me I would react more like him. Great story and can't wait to read the ending, keep up the good work

cpm09cpm09over 14 years ago
Loving it!

I am really enjoying this story, I think you are doing a great job! Hope you won't take long to post the next chapter! I am looking forward to it..

missingmissmissingmissabout 14 years ago
stupid mikey

well star is doing the one thing to stop her heart from aching, finding a replacement, yay for star!! she don't need a wimp like poofter mikey.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
MEN!!!!

Sometimes they do not see what is right in front them to be the best for them, then once they do they actually expect us to run back to them. The nerve of some people-right?

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 11 years ago

Star you will regret that you had sex with this guy, even if he does look like that fine ass Channing Tatum! Adrian isn't Micha, the man who has your heart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You need to show some pride in your writing, proof read and edit or find someone to do it for you. There is a difference between YOUR and YOU'RE, the punctuation and grammar errors, not to mention all the capital letters missing from names and the start of sentences is ridiculous. You have a talent for writing a storyline, but no idea how to pull it off right.

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I'm back heaux! 😋 Challenging myself to write something! Anything! I plan to use this as a place to work out my rough drafts so expect something new soon!

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