All Comments on 'Start the Revolution without Me Ch. 04'

Shit characters frankly, I'm no Saint but the language is so crude, I can't imagine any woman talking like that, great story though, I just wish it was news clips instead.

This reads like an extended, misogynistic rant. Which is pretty fun, but only because I read Clegg's story on a different site. So it's really the point-counterpoint kind of thing which makes it entertaining for me. Also, the news should report on the like-minded people traveling the other direction, in the way that tens of thousands of American Socialists went to Russia in the 1930's to help build the new Communist utopia.

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> This reads like an extended, misogynistic

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This Quote is content related, but I have to agree with it. I want to go farther here and say that it is not trolling to point out content of this sort. The stories and literature we write and read have a strong affect on the society in which we live. The content of these should be fair game for review and discussion .