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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well done, save for a bit of confusion on my part through the beginning.

I can imagine this having happened precisely as you scripted.

We had a ward of the county come live with us because the home she had been in had a young man (sin of lany accommodating the girl) and the kids were becoming an item. They dated while she was with us THEN, with the county's blessing, she moved back there.

Hmmm m m . . .

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
My first Foster Sibling

Loved the “Open Door “ idea .

Can’t wait for the next chapter

jcus0511jcus0511over 1 year ago

Wasn’t sure about this story at the start but as others have said the ‘open door’ idea is a delicious idea and the way it developed from there on a was great. I think I most appreciated the simple nature of the action supported by good writing and crafting of the yarn. Gets 5 stars as a consequence.

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Happily married, I write erotica for pleasure. For me, good erotica is 'real', be it tender and gentle or raw and raunchy. I welcome comments from readers, telling me what they particularly appreciated or disliked about a particular story. That feedback helps me as I try to d...

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