All Comments on 'Stormy Weather Ch. 02'

Add a little more to Page 3 than is written here,

They are at the Sylvia Beach Hotel in Newport, Oregon! Great place, and just as comfortable as you describe. Perfect for a romantic/erotic setting.

Absolutely correct on the Hotel.

A nice continuation of the story, but please....

" The weather outside started to get intensify " this sentence was poorly constructed and unnecessary. I'm sorry but this sort of thing detracts from the effort that writers put into their work.

We only had the play that night....Not the hotel. Wait....we did have each other.... We left the door opened..............it was magic