All Comments on 'Story of My Life Ch. 02'

wow she is having like the shittiest month ever. great story though cant wait to read more.

i really like it, want her and tommy to get together though!

DOUBLE L, GOOD STORY SO FAR....SEEMS LIKE THIS GIRLs LIFE MIRRORS THE MOVIE ABOUT BLONDES. TK U MLJ LV NV

but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee, longer chapters :(((

Longer chapters plea! Way too short but loving it so far

Again, you have some grammatical errors and you are using some words incorrectly (I believe you meant 'scarred' and not 'sacred' when describing the bathroom walk-in). If you would break and find an editor, I truly believe the quality of your work would vastly improve. It would make the stories that much easier to comprehend and enjoy; right now, I feel like I am playing Mad Libs with your stories. 3 stars from me!

I don't believe in any of these people. Should be in the science fiction section.

Would you start a story, get people interested, then not finish it.