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by RoomaniSyaahi

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RoomaniSyaahiRoomaniSyaahiabout 5 years agoAuthor
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Please leave your feedback, this is one of my first writings, Will be grateful for all your comments.

Thanks

R

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great start:

Good character build up as well as the sexual tension! I look for more to "cum"!

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Amateur writer here. Essentially a creative soul turned romantic at the hands of an equally loving husband. I write about experiences and fantasies alike, straight from India.