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cutelilhottiecutelilhottiealmost 4 years ago

:(

not as fun as the porn store one...

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 3 years ago

Wow. Okay, I mean, the opening ploy might not work with everyone, but it Could, and then we're off to the races.

I kept waiting for them to be industrial competitors who would ruin/steal the prototype or keep him from making the meeting or something, Oh, final thought on that line, the prototype actually works, and they actually turned it on, only its transmitting to a particular IP address. Now, when he gets home, someone in his organization will want to party with him, too.

Verrrry good story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

bem merda alguns minutos na delegacia e ele ia provar q n vem nada além q ela foi até ele

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Glad to have the chance to write my odd stories. What I write isn't mainstream but I enjoy writing them for those that enjoy them. I love feedback and to share ideas that I have for future stories. Please know that I do like to experiment, so some stories will be very differen...