All Comments on 'Stranger Coincidences Pt. 01'

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TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFake11 months ago

This was really interesting. Great writing, I wasn't sure where it was going. There are lots of mysteries. It's like a short story from 50 years ago. I don't understand the protagonist's goals or reaction, was this David just someone she corresponded with online, was he perhaps somehow whose personality had jumped between people and she'd met him before. At one level it might just be the result of someone online finding her in real life, enacting a fantasy.

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