All Comments on 'Stranger on a Train'

I left a detailed comment in the Story Feedback and voted a 3.

I posted a detailed comment on the Story Feedback forum, and in case you're wondering voted a 3

Only thing missing is you didn't mention me, your boyfriend who you intend introducing to the world of cockoldery. You know I will do anything to keep you even letting you fuck big cocked men and making me clean your pussy afterward with my loving mouth. Keep writing, Please

Accepting this was your first attempt at writing. It struck me it was all a bit rushed. One second his finger is sliding down her panties and next he's pushing his cock in her. Some elements were ok though. Keep trying. Try building the story a little more. Good luck.

What did I think of it? I loved it....