All Comments on 'Strawberry Milk Pt. 06'

by Sissyhalo1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I found this entire series very unusual but in a good way. I especially like how you have Kelly becoming less cruel. She is vindictive or maybe vengeful is a better word but not in the way she was at the beginning. I like how you give her these powers and they get really abused just because she can and I do believe that most people would act the same way but you are showing how she is learning, helping others and growing as a real person. Even though nanos have been done before, I like your take on them and how they are being handled. A well done 5 star effort and I look forward to more.

Agent X

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