by Bullzer
I don't know if you read my other comment on rimjobs on archiveofourown for this chapter? You said you didn't know how to get to them while making them seem dominate and I gave some suggestions.
-Jake S.
I was waiting for your post. As much as the behaviour of the characters don't seem plausible, I absolutely love the progression of the over-all story. That's why it's a fantasy outlet. Kudos.
I hope you write more often though.
Josh's monster of a cock would totally make Emi's stomach bulge when he fucks her