by Cream_Caramel
Excellent story..again. Oh! Um...I'm sorry if I'm over eager. It's just, you're my favorite writer so far, and apparently, even know how to turn tables...on the stripper's tormentors that is..Is it weird that I like that?
O-of course..still hoping Chapter 9 is Amy's parents stripping her in public this time, and not friends..maybe a little...incest?
I-is that b-bad? I'm sorry! *Hides*
The climax could have been longer. You had two pages of good build-up, another one for his punishment would have been better.
Wow! What an ending! The girls jacked John off into his open mouth and face! I didn't see that coming. But I enjoyed it greatly, even as a male!
I love your stories, but they only end up in the same way. Maybe you could have a special chapter where Amy and John are the winners of the game? Pretty please?
I do plan to have them win at some point, but I simply didn't want them to outright win when they're still not feeling good about their losses.
Rest assured now that Amy has accepted her love for the games, she's going to start winning more.
Total fantasy of mine to play a stripping game where at least one player had to walk home without a single stitch of clothing.