All Comments on 'Strong Safety Ch. 03'

Well Liam mother is alone too…

Awesome

5 ⭐️

Can’t wait for more

Perfectly written chapter in the series. She me edit problems in a few instances, but great plot development and story telling more than compensates for them. Only problem I have with the story is they are so young the likelihood of them lasting approaches zero. It would have been better to have them meet later in their college careers. 5.0*

@Nasty56: That's my thinking too.

Enjoying the series! Thanks for sharing!!

Excellent continuation. Looking forward to reading more chapters. 5stars

All I can offer is "CUTE" and that is not in a positive way.

You have a relaxed style [subject matter puerile] which is easy to read, maybe you get bogged down in morals and on here gee wiz wrong site. So maxed out at 3 or 4

{Borders on Kitsch to be honest but that is my opinion other will love it and that is quite A-Okay}

Enjoyable story!

4

Interesting take after the feedback on my first two stories.

I'm ready for more.

The family dynamics are just weird. Liam’s mother is so emotionally needy. The way she latched onto and started communicating with Liam’s girlfriend before they even started dating is concerning. Liam’s confiding in his mother about his physical relationship and asking for her permission and rules is making me like the story less.

Ty’s change in attitude is strange.

Boy, heavy on the smarmy southern ways. "Ma'am and sir" all day, and a lynching rope in the bed of the truck. I'm liking this less.

I’m lovin’ your stories and the emotional buildup. It has me expecting a traumatic ending and I want to read ahead. But, I am not ready to give up yet.

You get my five stars and looking forward to “the rest-of the story”,

Love the focus on making things right, the right way.

Still 5 stars from Xluckylee