Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Student Bodies Ch. 04: House of Cards'

by 1fastguy

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
Edward1970Edward1970almost 3 years ago

An interesting conclusion to an interesting series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Up to chapter 3 I enjoyed it. I was hoping for a continuation of the theme and including more sponsors and students. Maybe there could be an alternative ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story has the potential of being drawn out much further. Chapter 4 ended abruptly, as though it had to be finished and wrapped up immediately. Just as the characters are developed there's a rush ending.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
user1fastguy@1fastguy
102 Stories
305 Followers
My stories often spin off from happenings in my own life, or else reflect my curiosity about a range of things. I like a story with some underlying factual content. It should be about 'something', even if most of the tale is simply sexual fantasy. .