by DHerbert
I like the story but I’d recommend adding more dialogue and less exposition.
The story is great. I only hope there is a positive end to it for the girl. a bit like the Vulgus stories. The characters are in real trouble, but at the end something good comes out of it.
Mmmm why not make me, oh I mean her take all the guys back to the bedroom for fun😈
Sorry for the delay in getting part 8 out. It is nearly done - and then will have to go through approval etc.
I've been spending most of my time on Medium lately (https://medium.com/@DianneHerbert) where I've been putting up a number of true life nude dares and such that I've been embarking on. Including letting Twitter decide what sexual adventures I'd have one weekend - and then writing up the results. Getting my regular stories out has taken a back-burner for the moment!
Great story progression enjoy it definitely going to keep an eye on this writer and I've got to see this twitter page lol
I like the way you write. The mental side of it - you describe what is complex and confusing and sometimes hard to even understand in a sexy way. Likely your smart sub skills coming out. So far my favorite part is sitting with friends with her legs spread and the peeing and hair washing in the toilet. A plus for a virgin.
You stories are always different and i am very intrigued and awaiting for your new story