All Comments on 'Stupid History Bet Pt. 02'

by DeathbyRuRu

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Can we have part 3 please?

I really like where this is going, please continue writing.

Thank tou

mickeyd52317mickeyd52317almost 4 years ago

Outstanding story. Keep writing please

bushyTrailbushyTrailalmost 4 years ago

I didn't much like then brutality in the last portion of this submission. I'd like the whole thing to be fueled by her obsession with bets and dares, rather than physical dominance and revenge. And it would be awesome if you expanded the flashbacks on her previous adventures (like the cheating to avoid blowing 100 people a month).

Keep writing, though, these are just personal suggestions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

Really good stuff, hope you keep the series going. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I know it's hard to believe, but this was even more stupid than chapter one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The cumshots in the eye thing was hot af

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userDeathbyRuRu@DeathbyRuRu
Alright, for those that do not understand, most of my stories will involve someone paying for their mistakes. I don't hate women. Not a whole lot I can say other than I'm a writer. I've written in Hollywood and on other websites, and now I'm going to do some writing here.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES