by DeathbyRuRu
I really like where this is going, please continue writing.
Thank tou
I didn't much like then brutality in the last portion of this submission. I'd like the whole thing to be fueled by her obsession with bets and dares, rather than physical dominance and revenge. And it would be awesome if you expanded the flashbacks on her previous adventures (like the cheating to avoid blowing 100 people a month).
Keep writing, though, these are just personal suggestions.
I know it's hard to believe, but this was even more stupid than chapter one.