All Comments on 'Succubus - A 750 Word Story'

Original!

Interesting!!

Five Stars!!!!!

Wow. original and hot

I would pull anchor and take off.

Torch the other guy's boat and sale away.

I guess she really was a succubus (JBOL). This is one story that would have benefited from being a little longer, but I still enjoyed it; thanks!

Enjoyable quick read, thanks. xox

Good premise for a story, and as far as this one goes it was well done. Can't help but feel strongly that this is way too large a creative undertaking to be limited to the 750 word format, and that it leaves an unfinished tone which is disappointing and dissatisfying.

Please continue this tale. (Or some other writer pick it up and run with it.)

Thank you.

MLJ

WTF? Three stars ⭐️.

Hot story, but it belongs in Erotic Horror