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Anonymousabout 1 year ago5 Stars. WOW! A great read, you are a very talented writer. Hopefully they'll be a chapter 2 with Brie.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoGood premise.
But the sex is really meh.
Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay.
Blowjob started too abruptly.
She bares her breasts by pulling off her blouse in one fell swoop. Why? Why no dialog about how her breasts looked? Felt? Why didn't she tease him with them?
Anal was useless. No preliminaries? No touching? Fingering? Tonguing? Lubrication?
Ad you need consistency. Maybe an editor/proofreader. You wrote PEDDLE once and PEDAL next -- both meaning PEDAL.
Three stars.
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honeybunny18@honeybunny18I sometimes catch my friends dad's looking at me. I always wonder what they are thinking and if they jerk off thinking about me.
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