All Comments on 'Sugar Daddy'

Nice story. I hope to see more.

I don’t wish to kill your spirit, but this was horribly written. Misspellings, bad grammar, malaprops, and ridiculous euphemisms. Not to mention an absurd and unfulfilling ending.

If you couldn’t sing to save your life, would you audition for The Voice? Because that’s essentially what you’ve done.

Is this completely stupid or have I missed something.

Good first.

OK, so this writing was very unpolished and full of errors, but the underlying story worked well and showed potential. The ending was rushed. Get an editor to work on improving your writing, and try again.

*****I found this story very entertaining, and I like your style of writing. Please continue to write your stories for those of us who know where you are coming from. Thanks for sharing.