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Click here"Wrong. You'll get something out of doing this, even if it isn't a new girl so you'll send me half now and the other half when you're rich friends are gang banging her and you're collecting the money. Deal or I don't send it."
"Show me a pic."
Laci pulled a pic she took from Lawrence's phone. She was in her underwear but it was enough.
"Nice. Cute. It's a deal. What did she do to piss you off?"
"Bye Emmitt."
She fucked my husband without my permission.
Laci lit a cigarette and waited for the money to hit her account. Once it was there, she sent the information. Sorry, Abby. Life sucks. Laci got out of the hot tub and dried off inside while Mandy slept. She got naked again in crawled in bed, smiling at her work. She pulled up the video of Lawrence fucking her and slowly started rubbing her naked body. Turning her head, she pulled the blanket from her sister to see her ass in the same green satin panties Laci wore in the video. She moved her eyes from the video to her sister before the sound finally woke Mandy up.
"Please tell me last night didn't happen?" She rolled over and looked at Laci who was masturbating with a slight smile on her face.
"Please tell me you aren't doing what I'm watching you do."
"And I'm doing it looking at your ass," Laci responded as she spread her legs wider.
"I thought you were just drunk."
"I was and so were you, but I'm not now so either watch me and let me look at you or help me."
Laci just closed her eyes as she felt her sister scoot closer and moaned softly when she felt her tongue on her nipple.
- COMMENTS
Silasmarnerover 1 year agoAuthorThis is perspectives pt. 3b. The title is still not correct. The story reads in order 1a, 1b, 1c, 2a, etc. the remaining parts will just be pt. 7, 8, etc. I think I finish this in 9 unless Laci’s sister does something I don’t expect.
New perspectives will be out following the end of this one.
Silasmarnerover 1 year agoAuthorHello Leibowitz,
The story is read in the order of (A1, A2, B1. B2, etc). The idea was to fill in other things in the past from other viewpoints as the story progressed. Some of them are the same event from the other person's view point. I explained that in the first few side stories. A fun experiment but maybe not for stories that aren't published together. It was worth a shot.
The last part's story name is an error on Literotica's side. I have no idea where that title came from but it has been submitted for an edit. It should be Perspectives 3b.
The remaining parts will all be 7, 8, and maybe 9. 3b was the last side story.
The next story will be "New Perspectives" and it will have a prologue if you don't want to read this series. Thanks for the feedback.
Leibowitzover 1 year agoI have not yet read your series of stories. I have to say, however, that your sequencing of them is utterly baffling, and makes me hesitant to start in on them. Are they to be read in the order of the dates of their posting? Or in the order of their sequence numbers? If the former, then what is the purpose of the sequence numbers? If the latter, then no one should start reading until all the parts have been published, as you keep going back to insert additional parts. Moreover, all of the pieces are identified as "Parts", except for the most recent one (3b), which is a "Chapter". Is 3b intended to play a different role in the sequence, or is its identification just sloppy? And, BTW, 3b also has a different title: "Sugar Perspectives", as opposed to "Perspectives" like all the others. I would have thought from the title that it is a different story, but the 3b sequence identifier says otherwise.
Of course, it may be that, after publishing a few parts of the story, you realize that some of the earlier parts should really have had more content --- leading you to go back and add additional sub-parts. But that is belied by the fact that you've published the earlier parts with an "a" suffix, indicating that they are incomplete; so you know in advance that more needs to be added.
If you are going to use such a strange publishing & numbering sequence, then I think you should at least publish a guide concerning the order in which you intend the various parts be read. And if they can be read effectively in any sequence, then say so.
