by JessicaTrustworthy
That's a good start, but we need more. We need the back story. Him and his ex, her time in prison, perhaps her in a girl on girl in prison, or her and a male guard. Then they need to fuck everywhere, they can on the ship. There should be several chapters. Each at least 2 pages. Overall though not a bad effort.
Don't think I ever rated this although i mayve give you my thoughts in the story. You did such a great job of role reversal.