by Reindeer58
A lot of tease and a well written story, hope to read more.
Three gorgeous neighbours and Jack's only now getting to know them! Good build up but how can he take the continual teasing and up to Chapter 4 only a couple of BJ's! He really is made of steel.... Am very keen to read on as I'm sure Reindeer58 has majoe plans for 1:1, 2:1, 3:1 and every other combination in subsequent chapters, - dont you! Thanks very much.
xox Sammy
Gorgeous women, beautifully clothed and posed, make for a great premise. There's heat here too. However, the dialogue and pace, or lack of it, is killing me - it goes on and on and on... . I understand the teasing - varying degrees from different women - but this is exhausting. We're through four chapters with no sex - I'm losing interest.