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Anonymousabout 13 years agoNot at all bad.
A sexy story, told quite well. But what does "unmercilessly" actually mean? The opposite of "mercilessly" is surely "mercifully". Is that really what you meant to say?
Please don't fall into the "crespucular reticule" trap of wordiness for wordiness' sake.
Four stars and thanks.
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