All Comments on 'Summers Beast Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

if you find an editor to help out with the regular story writing errors, this could potentially become a potential ~4 star

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11about 5 years ago
Great start - looking forward to seeing the next chapter

Clever intro.

Great characters.

Believable back story.

What's not to like.

More please

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