All Comments on 'Sunday Fun Day'

by chubber

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Sunday may have been fun day, but when her husband came home the following week with a large envelope with paperwork and antibiotics, it became divorce day. His wife had shared a myriad of diseases from her unkempt lovers, including a few that would cause them both a lifetime of treatment. His only words? "You explain it to the kids, you dumb slut."

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Love cheating wives. It’d make a great story if she just told how she first got fucked by a black man. Right now she’s heading down a very dangerous path. Especially with kids & a husband. How long before she catches something way more serious than a black baby to raise.

RanDog025RanDog0255 months ago

This is what I imagine a 9th grader who just started noticing women, would write. It had to be a gangbang with a bunch of mythically hung black guys. Works for a comedy! 1 star for the synopsis.

ehppmsehppms4 months ago

A nice short story, would have liked more sexual detail, but nice never the less.

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