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by Funloving62

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good concept, but edit!

It was hard to enjoy the story, which has a good idea at its core, because the piece needs serious editing. It's not bad, especially if English is not your first language, but it got confusing. Just how many tits can one girl have?

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