All Comments on 'Sunshine and Darkness Ch. 01'

Please continue. I would like to read more.

Can't wait for the next chapter - captivating

I cant wait for the next part.

Hi, A lovely beginning to what I think will be a very erotic

story. Looking forward to reading the next and future chapters. Saw you in chat yesterday and always love to read authors who chat with the groupies. lol. wendy

The characters have all been built up well and you have away of doing that. Waitin for the next. But the categorisation should have been avoided since then it would have been a real suspense.

It was an interesting and erotic read I look forward to more.

Matt

Great story, love the build up.

Some good character build up and creates a sense of anticipation…nicely done

A very good first chapter. As a reader I am now informed and ready to join her in the adventure,

Is Marcus a demon on earth. His portrayal makes me fear for Becca’s safety. I wonder why some women like men who are clearly sexually ruthless. The opening passages about the abusive marriage rang very true. I am the child of such a marriage.