All Comments on 'Super Smash Live'

What a wonderful,sexy story. Please let us have some more.

Many, many writing problems. Might have been a good story if they were corrected.

Thanks for reading and for the feedback. I actually reached out to about a dozen editors and no one was able to help me out unfortunately. I do plan to write more and will reach out to editors again.

If you can’t find an editor please start with learning the difference between there and they’re and to and too. Sadly the lack of basic grammar ruined the story for me.

Thanks for the feedback. I will work on the basic grammar. Feedback is always appreciated and more so from members with accounts.

The story was just getting started! What is the next chapter. Happy to consider editing if there is more.

Glad you enjoyed it. I will consider bringing these characters back again!