All Comments on 'Supra Hypnosis Ch. 02'

by JoopExcite

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chipmonk9chipmonk9about 1 year ago

A bit branded for tge first half of tge ch has it felt like tge MC was just going threw tge motions do he at least became more active later in ch.

FlemzjohnFlemzjohnabout 1 year ago

Post more. Would like to see where all this goes with the three women.

toddjlertoddjler9 months ago

Amazing, hope there is more in the works.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor8 months ago

While I loved the concept of your story, Your main character indeed earns the award for the biggest dumbass ive ever come across. It makes it completely undeletable that he had earned that promotion himself. He is so damn clueless and incapable of reading a situation in under a few hours.

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